Michele Ank
Things I like and don't like I like: swimming, hamburguer, ice cream, italian food, pizza, oranges, tea, water, coffee, juice, soda I don't like: basketball, tenis, chinese food,
2014년 10월 11일 오후 1:50
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Things I like and don't like

I like: swimming, hamburguers, ice cream, italian food, pizza, oranges, tea, water, coffee, juice, soda



I don't like: basketball, tenis, Chinese food

2014년 10월 24일
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Things I like and don't like

I like: swimming, hamburguer, ice cream, italian food, pizza, oranges, tea, water, coffee, juice, soda



I don't like: basketball, tenis, chinese food,

 

spelling mistakes

*hamburger

*tennis 

2014년 10월 11일
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Things I like and don't like

I like: swimming, hamburguer, ice cream, italian food, pizza, oranges, tea, water, coffee, juice, soda

the way u used a comma to separate the  list  itemes was great but at the end of the list right before the last item u should omit the comma and use and insted... 


I don't like: basketball, tenis, chinese food, (instead of the  green comma u should use and.... never end up a sentence using a comma... there should be a period.

2014년 10월 11일
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