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The galician grass to attracting Legend has it, that on the coast of north of Galicia, when spring starts in the highest and most rugged parts of the cliffs, a flower is born to be kept alive and resists during all the suns of summer. And they say that this flower has at its core two goddesses magic. The goddess Aine, who rules the four winds. And the Goddess Deva, who is the owner of all the seas. In my land we know as "namoreira" or flower love They say that if the pick in a sunset when the moon is hidden by the sun, the new moon phase and in doing so invoke the names of goddesses, love will always be in your life. You must keep it in a small wooden box with some silver and some gold. You should know also that although dried, does not lose its color and beauty. If you ever come to my land and you approach these places, do not stop looking for her.

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The Galician grass to attracting 

Legend has it, that on the coast of north of Galicia, when spring starts in the highest and most rugged parts of the cliffs, a flower is born to be kept alive and survives during all the suns of summer. And they say that this flower has at its core two  magic goddesses:the goddess Aine, who rules the four winds, and the Goddess Deva, who is the owner of all the seas.

In my land we know it as "namoreira" or flower of love

They say that if you  pick it at sunset when the moon is hidden by the sun, in the new moon phase ,and in doing so invoke the names of goddesses, love will always be in your life.

You must keep it in a small wooden box with some silver and some gold.
You should know also that although dried, does not lose its color and beauty.

If you ever come to my land and you approach these places, do not stop looking for this flower.

 

I don't understand the meaning of "to attracting" 

At the end I added "this flower" because I think otherwise the word "her" is not completely clear.

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The galician grass for attracting a lover

Legend has it, that on the coast of north of Galicia, when spring starts in the highest and most rugged parts of the cliffs, a flower is born to be kept alive and resists the suns strong rays during all the of summer. And they say that this flower has at its core two magic goddesses magic.

The goddess Aine, who rules the four winds. And the Goddess Deva, who is the owner of all the seas.

In my land we know it as "namoreira" or flower love  (OR, it is know as)

They say that if you pick it at sunset when the moon is hidden by the sun, in the new moon phase and in doing so invoke the names of goddesses, love will always be in your life.

You must keep it in a small wooden box with some silver and some gold.
You should know also that when it is dried, it does not lose its colour and beauty.

If you ever come to my land and you approach these places, do not stop looking for it.

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