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For my study, i need to present a project in english, Can you correct me please ?
Hello, Let me introduce myself, my name is Jonathan from UTBM, where I am a student so.. I read an article on " the New York Times " about a new project aimed at / with a goal of reducing CO2 in the Earth, in Canada. The new technology is used to capture Co2 from coal factories by using a ventilation. After that C02 can be stored under the Earth and can be use by petroleum industry to extract oil and natural gas. After I have read this newspaper I was thinking about this question : " capturing CO2: Is it a good project for the future ? To answering this topic, i will cover three points :
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For my study, I need to present a project in English. Can you correct me, please ?
Hello. Let me introduce myself. My name is Jonathan, and I am from UTBM, where I am a student. so.. I read an article in " the New York Times " about a new project from Canada to reduce CO2 on the earth, In Canada. The new technology is to capture Co2 from coal factories by using a ventilation. After that, C02 can be stored under the earth and can be use by the petrolumn industry for extracting oil and natural gas. After I have read this newspaper, I was thinking about this question: "Capturing CO2: Is it a good project for the future? To answering this topic, i will cover three points :
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