Improve my English ^^ Hello Everyone, I am Sarah . :) I want to improve my English so much because its important for my career. Now I am a final year in Pharmacy faculty and I will get a new job in t

Sarah

Improve my English ^^ Hello Everyone, I am Sarah . :) I want to improve my English so much because its important for my career. Now I am a final year in Pharmacy faculty and I will get a new job in the next year . So it will better if I can speak well in English. ^^ Thank you .

2014년 10월 23일 오전 5:14

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Some small corrections:

I want to improve my English so much because it isimportant for my career

"Now I am a final year student at the Pharmacy faculty" or "I am a final year pharmacy student"

I will get a new job in the next year

So it will be better if I can speak well in English. ^^

2014년 10월 23일