Camilo
I have a friends in a few minutes Hi, yesterday I have three new friends in a few minutes, it`s great and I have so happy. hope find a lot of people for talk and learn meny things in english. thanks for help me to think in english.
2014년 10월 23일 오전 8:54
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I have a friends in a few minutes

Hi, yesterday I have got (or met) three new friends in a few minutes, it`s great and I have was so happy. hope to find a lot of people for talk and learn many things in English.

thanks for helping me to think in English.

2014년 10월 23일

I had friends in a few minutes

 

Hi, yesterday I had (but met would be better) three new friends within a few minutes, it`s great and I am so happy. I hope to find a lot of people for conversations and learning many things in English.

thanks for helping me to think in English.

2014년 10월 23일
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