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Please correct my entry, Thanks. ( 4 ) 1 - In the first place, I need to drink some water, and then we can start our meeting. So, May I ? 2 - Not only you who are responsible for caring about the house work, but also me have to share you playing this role. We are partners, and we share one life. 3 - As a matter of fact, I wasn't thinking about marriage at all. but after meeting her, I feel that I would feel regret about each moment I spend in the rest of my life without her. 4 - I have noticed that many students here prefer to start with Word as a first exam except John. In like manner, I have decided to follow John steps and starting with Windows. 5 - Today I have plans to go for shopping with some friends, In addition going to visit Mr Tom our previous maths teacher. He has moved to other school. We need to congrats him and to wish the good luck. Please correct my entry, or try to help me to express any of these sentences in a better way ( Like how native speakers would express ). May I ask you for one more thing? Could you please evaluate my sentences ( From 1 - 10 ) from your opinion ? Thanks in advance.

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1 - I need to drink some water before we can start our meeting. May I? 


2 - You aren't the only one responsible for doing all the house work. I have to help you. We are partners, and we share one life.

3 - As a matter of fact, I wasn't thinking about marriage at all, but after meeting her, I feel like I would feel regret every moment I spend without her for the rest of my life .

4 - I have noticed that many students here prefer to start with Word as a first exam except John. In like manner, I have decided to follow John steps and starting with Windows. <-- I don't quite understand what you're trying to say here

5 - Today I have plans to go for shopping with some friends. Also, I will visit Mr Tom, our previous maths teacher. <-- In addition sounds too formal. He has moved to another school. We need to congratulate him and to wish him good luck.

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