I don't usually get lost, although I live in São Paulo I always have GPS whit me. So I never go to the dangerous parts of town. But a five years ago I did get lost. I was in the car with my boyfriend, today my husband, and we didn't have GPS. We drove for tree and or four hours. We stopped many times at dangerous and deserted places to ask for information and finally and angel appeared and showed us the rite right direction to arrive at our destination (our hotel).

I Don't usually get lost, even tought I live in São Paulo I always carry a gps with me so that I never go to dangerous parts of town. However, five years ago I did get lost. I was in the car with my boyfriend (today my husband) and we didnt have a GPS. We drove for tree or four hours, stopped many times at dangerous and deserted places to ask for information and finally an angel appeared and showed us the right direction to our destination, out hotel.

Your english is good, just some gramatical and spelling mistakes (I make them too). I would suggest you to use more transition words in case you want to write better essays, get a good mark on your toelf exam or just improve your writing skills. Nonetheless good job :)

Getting Lost

I don't usually get lost. Although I live in São Paulo I always have GPS with me. So I never go to the dangerous parts of town. But about five years ago I did get lost. I was in the car with my boyfriend, today my husband, and we didn't have GPS. We drove for three or four hours. We stopped many times at dangerous and deserted places to ask for information and finally an angel appeared and showed us the right direction to arrive at our destination (our hotel).

Good job!

Getting Lost

I don`t usually get lost, although I live in São Paulo I always have GPS whit with me. So I never go to the dangerous parts of town. But a five years ago I did get lost. I was in the car with my boyfriend, today my husbandwho is now my husband, and we didn`t have GPS. We drove for tree three and to four hours. We stopped many times at dangerous and deserted places to ask for information and finally and angel appeared and showed us the rite right direction to arrive at our destination (our hotel).