Attempt #1 at making sentences in Japanese

はたし　わ　ち　お　あした　あげる！
はたし　たまぎる！
はたし　わ　カル　とる。。。

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I think you have some of your hiragana mixed up. I believe the first word you're trying to use is "watashi" (I, me). In hiragana that's わたし. The kanji is 私.

Next, you use the particle that is pronounced "wa" (topic particle), but even though it's pronounced "wa" it's written using the "ha" hiragana which is は.

After chishio you used the particle that is pronounced "o" (direct object), but it is written with the "wo" hiragana, which is を, not お.

So an example sentence using those particles is:

わたし　は　ピザ　を　たべます。(watashi wa piza o tabemasu - I eat pizza) Note, spaces are only used in Japanese for learners, so that you can see where the words end. It's not the right way to write it.

私はピザを食べます。- this would be the most proper way, but don't worry if you don't know all the kanji yet.

Anyway, I don't think I'll correct the sentences because I'm not quite sure what you'd like to say. I'm guessing about the hiragana mix-up. Sometimes it's nice to include the English of what you want to say so that people correcting can make sure they're correcting it uuh correctly.

Attempt #1 at making sentences in Japanese

はたし　わ　ちしお　お　あした　あげる！
はたし　たまぎる！
はたし　わ　カル　とる。。。