Min Jeong
[#2] I work in Advertisement agency. Hi. I love advertisement and have done intern at a foreign ad company for about 1 year. After I worked there, I started the internship in another Korea ad company. Finally, I passed intership test in Aug, this year. So I'll enter the company next year. Now I have traveled many place such as Hongkong, Macau and Tailand. In Dec, I'll go to Taipai. If you know the place that was recommend to many people, please let me know.
2014년 11월 1일 오전 3:40
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[#2] I work in an Advertisement agency.

Hi. I love advertisement Advertising and I have done an internship at a foreign ad company for about 1 year. After I worked there, I started the internship in another Korea ad company. Finally, I passed my internship test in Aug, this year. So I'll enter the company next year. Now I have traveled many places such as Hong Kong, Macau and Thailand. In Dec, I'll go to Taipai. If you know the any place that was recommended to many people*, please let me know.

 

<em>*a more flowing way to say it is: "If you know any place that is highly recommended..."</em>

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<em>Great writing!</em>

2014년 11월 1일
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