上弦月
my hope I am a lovely Chinese girl, now at the University School of medicine. In the next life I want to go abroad for further study. I also like English this language. Finally, I hope we can make friends.
2014년 11월 1일 오전 11:32
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My Hope

I am a lovely [賣花讚花香] Chinese girl, now studying at the University School of Medicine [如果你的意思是在大学讀医学, 那就要寫成為 "... studying medicine at a university, 這样改法, 是大学的名]. In the next life [哈哈, 来世!!!] I want to go abroad for further study. I also like the English this language. Finally, I hope we can make become [make friends = 交朋結友, become friends = 成为朋友 = 做朋友, 你的英文的意思是, 让我们去交朋結友而不是, "我们来做个朋友吧"] friends.

2014년 11월 1일
I hope that you achieve your wishes.
2014년 11월 1일
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