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Not bad for a first note.... However, can I make a few suggestions? The corrections are in red.
First note
Hi. This is my first note.
I accidentally visit this site when finding way to learn English.
I visited this site on accident trying to find ways to learn English.
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I stumbled onto this site trying to find other ways of learning English.
I want to learn how to speak and write English better.
I think I can read and hear English but I am bad at writing and speaking.
My English is limited. I can read and understand English, but I am not so good at writing and speaking the language.
So I come itaki everyday free time.
On my spare time I come to itaki every day for that purpose.
I am bad teacher Korean, but you want some help, please contact me.
Um. This is my first note, and i am better next.:)
I also teach Korean. I am not the best at it but if you want some help feel free to contact me.
This is my first note and the next one will be a lot better.
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