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I Want to Learn English
I have just graduated from school, and I've been Now I working for about 3 months in Beijing. When I come to arrived in Beijing, I encountered find many foreigners and I wanted to make friends with them. I want to learn about their know there cultures, countries and so on. But I cannot speak English very well. I am afraid to make some mistakes. In addition, I am afraid to talk, so I want to make some foreign friends and communicate with them smoothly.
Thank you.
I want to learn English
I just graduated from school. Now Recently I have been working about 3 three [1] months in Beijing. When I come came to Beijing, I find found many foreigners. I want to make friends with them. I want to know there their culture, country and so on. But I can not speak English very well. I am afraid to make some mistakes. In addition, I am afraid to talk. I want to make some foreign friends and to communicate with them smoothly fluently.
Thank you.
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[1] Spell any number up to ten.
Remember to add a space (' ') after every comma (',') and full stop ('.').
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Please don't worry about the number of corrections I have made. Your meaning was very clear, and you only made small mistakes.
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