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My oldest frind My oldest friend is Emily we met twenty years ago wen we our bought ten years old. It was my first day at school and I was very unhappy because I wanted my father. Emily gave me some snacks and we became friends immediately. We were together almost every day until we finished to school seven years letter. Then I went to college, but Emily didn't. She got married when she was just twenty and read five children. I studied for seven years because I wanted to be a doctor. I read a lot of new friends, and I did't see Emily very offen. Some times we didn't see it other four years, But we offen talk on the Skype. Now I'm married, to. I live near Emily so we met every month. She is a student now, and I have ten children, so we can give it other a lot of advice!
2014년 11월 12일 오후 3:15
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My Oldest Friend

My oldest friend is Emily, we met twenty years ago when we were our bought ten years old. It was my first day at school and I was very unhappy because I wanted my father. Emily gave me some snacks and we became friends immediately. We were together almost every day until we finished to school seven years later letter.

Then I went to college, but Emily didn't. She got married when she was just twenty and read had five children. I studied for seven years because I wanted to be a doctor. I read made a lot of new friends, and I didn't see Emily very often. Sometimes we didn't see it each other four years, but we often talked on the Skype.

Now I'm married, too. I live near Emily so we meet every month. She is a student now, and I have ten children, so we can give it each other a lot of advice!

2014년 11월 12일
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My oldest friend

My oldest friend is Emily. We met twenty years ago when we were both ten years old. It was my first day at school and I was very unhappy because I wanted my father. Emily gave me some snacks and we became friends immediately. We were together almost every day until we finished school seven years later.

Then I went to college, but Emily didn't. She got married when she was just twenty and had five children. I studied for seven years because I wanted to be a doctor. I had a lot of new friends, and I didn't see Emily very often. Sometimes we didn't see each other for years, but we often talked on Skype.

Now I'm married, too. I live near Emily so we meet every month. She is a student now, and I have ten children, so we can give each other a lot of advice!


Wonderful! :)

2014년 11월 12일
1

My oldest frind

My oldest friend is Emily. we Her and I met twenty years ago when we our bought were ten years old. It was my first day at school and I was very unhappy because I wanted my father. Emily gave me some snacks and we became friends immediately. We were together almost every day until we finished to school seven years letter.

Then I went to college afterword, but Emily didn't. She got married when she was just twenty and read had five children. I studied for seven years because I wanted to become a doctor. I made a lot of new friends, and I did't see Emily very offen. Sometimes we didn't see it other four one another for years, but we offen talk on the Skype.

Now I'm married now. to. I and live near Emily so we meet every month. She is a student now and I have ten children. so we can give it other are able to give one another a lot of advice!

 

Not bad!!

Jerry (English tutor)

2014년 11월 12일
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