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Letter Dear Sarah, I hope that you are doing well. My name is Lisanne. I'm fifteen and I live in a small village in The Netherlands. I'm going to tell you about the events in wich I'm looking forward to. The feast of st Nicholas will soon start in The Netherlands! The supermarkets are filled with tasty sweets and the children will get presents. I'm also looking forward to Christmas! My family and I will go out for a meal at the feast of st Nicholas and we're going to give each other presents at Christmas. It's going to be great! How are you going to celebrate Christmas? Have a nice day! best wishes, Lisanne Thanks for reading! Could you please tell me how you are going to celebrate Christmas? :) (if you're going to celebrate it)

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Dear Sarah,

I hope that you are doing well.

My name is Lisanne. I'm fifteen, and I <---no need to put an "I" here live in a small village in the Netherlands. I'm going to tell you about the events in wich I'm looking forward to. The feast of St. Nicholas will soon start in the Netherlands! The supermarkets are filled with tasty sweets and the children will be getting presents. I'm also looking forward to Christmas! My family and I will go out for a meal at the feast of St. Nicholas and we're going to give each other presents at Christmas. It's going to be great! How are you going to celebrate Christmas?

Have a nice day!

best wishes,

Lisanne

Thanks for reading! Could you please tell me how you are going to celebrate Christmas? :) (if you're going to celebrate it)

 

Saint Nichlas is abreviated as St. Nicolas and "yes", the period after St. is correct.

I will be celebrating Christmas with family. Very well done on your note entry!

 

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