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Write about what happened today i woke up at 10:00am and y went to the mall with my friend and she told me that she wanted watched a movie and ate pop corns and coke and then wejnt to my house and have the lunch.
2014년 11월 22일 오후 5:12
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A writing about what happened today

I woke up at 10:00am and y went to the mall with my friend. She told me that she wanted to watch a movie, eat popcorn, and drink a/some coke.  Then we went to my house to have the lunch.

 

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About my day

I woke up at 10am and went to the mall with my friend because she told me that she wanted to watch a movie today.  While we were watching the movie, she ate popcorn and drank a coke.  Afterwards, we went to my house to have lunch.

2014년 11월 22일
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