Ji Hyun Song
My first note...!! I joined this page yesterday. My writing is not good. :( But I have to screw up my courage and write note. From now on, I often write the note about my story.
2014년 11월 23일 오전 11:38
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My first note...!!

I joined this page website yesterday.
My writing is not good. :(
But I have to screw up my courage and write note.

But I have to overcome my embarassment and show courage and write notes

From now on, I will often write the notes about my story.

 

 

2014년 11월 23일
Your writing is fine. :P You have good ideas. There are some grammar mistakes, but any English speaker will understand your writing!
2014년 11월 24일

My first note...!!

I joined this page Italki yesterday.
My writing is not good but I need to have to screw up my have courage and write notes
From now on, I will often write the notes about my story.

2014년 11월 24일
oh Thank you so much!!!
2014년 11월 23일
I joined this website years ago but I seldom use to post my writing but now I'm also planning to write post more often. Good luck for us!
2014년 11월 23일
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