Andrew Zhao
The Power of Nature. Last night the wind blew heavily with thunder roar and lightning, and I was waken up from sleeping, then the rain poured down. To be frank, it was a bit scared at that time, I couldn't help to adoring the power of nature.
2014년 11월 24일 오전 7:30
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The Power of Nature.

Last night the wind blew heavily with roaring thunder roar and lightning,. and I was woken waken up from sleeping, then the rain poured down.
To be frank, it was a bit scaredscary at that the time, . I couldn't help to adoring the power of nature.


This is how I would have said it...

Last night the wind blew so hard. There was so much thunder and lightning. I woke up from sleeping when rain poured down. To be honest, it was a kind of scary and I couldn't help adoring the power of nature.

 

I hope this helps!

 

~Tutor Stephy (University student and future Italki Community Tutor)

2014년 11월 24일
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