kindness

kindness in words creats confidence, kindness in thinking creates profoundness, kindness in given creats love.

Kindness

Kindness in words creates confidence, kindness in thinking creates profoundness, kindness in giving creates love.

Bien. Les seules corrections s'agissent de la capitalisation et l'orthographe des mots "creates" et "giving." ("Given" est le participe passé du mot "give.")