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Cold Day Today is a cold day, I go to school early And I like the weather because I'm wearing sweater so i don't feeling about this cold day, I will make some tea with milk now, I'm sitting in the yard alone and look at my students.
2014년 11월 27일 오전 4:37
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Cold Day

 

Today is a cold day.

 

<em>Pefect.</em>

 

I go to school early And I like the weather because I'm wearing sweater so i don't feeling about this cold day, I will make some tea with milk now, I'm sitting in the yard alone and look at my students.

 

<em>(Try to write in shorter sentences.)</em>

 

I go to school early.  I like the weather because I can wear a sweater.

 

... so i don't feeling about this cold day . . .

??? 

 

I will make some tea with milk now<em>.  <--------- perfect</em>

 

<em>I'm sitting in the yard, alone, and I look at my students. </em>

 

<em>also: I'm sitting alone in the yard, and I look at my students. </em>

2014년 11월 27일
you need to organize your thoughts while writing , you're moving so quickly from a point to another ! , this will make it hard to grow up with your grammar specially with tenses ! ..Good Luck!
2014년 11월 27일

A Cold Day

Today is a cold day, I went to school early and I like the weather because I'm wearing a sweater so i don't feel about this cold day.NowI am making some tea with milk, I'm sitting in the yard alone and looking at my students.

2014년 11월 27일
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