Terry
A LETTER TO ANNE Dear Anne, How are you? Thank you very much for your last letter in which you asked me about some changes I had made in my room. I wasn't keen of my room because I thought that it was good for little children, so I made some changes. First of all I painted the walls red and I hugh new paintings. I bought a big desk and a comfortable chair. I think that my room is fantastic now! Endeed it is more comfortable and lovely. That's all for now. Write back soon and tell me all your news. LOVE
2014년 11월 28일 오후 5:58
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A LETTER TO ANNE

Dear Anne,
How are you? Thank you very much for your last letter in which you asked me about some changes I had made in my room. I wasn't keen of my room because I thought that it was good for little children, so I made some changes.
First of all I painted the walls red and I hugh hung new paintings. I bought a big desk and a comfortable chair. I think that my room is fantastic now! Endeed Indeed it is more comfortable and lovely. That's all for now. Write back soon and tell me all your news.
LOVE

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<em>Good job, only some minor corrections!</em>

2014년 11월 29일
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