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Sherlock Holmes I heard that yesterday was Sherlock Homes's birthday. I mean that the first story about him appeared on December 1, 1887. The author was Arthur Conan Doyle, and a name of the novel was "A Study in Scarlet. Although the story was about 150 pages, it only took Dole three weeks to write. I have not read it yet, so I want to choose it when I buy next new novel.
2014년 12월 1일 오후 11:39
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Sherlock Holmes

I heard that yesterday about Sherlock Homes's birthday. I mean that was the first story about him appeared on December 1, 1887.
The author is Arthur Conan Doyle, and the title of the novel is "A Study in Scarlet". Although the story is about 150 pages, it only took Dole three weeks to write. I have not (haven't) read it yet, so I want to choose it when I will buy next new novel.

2014년 12월 2일
Hi, HAJAR. I'm sorry,I didn't notice your comment. Thank you for your advice.
2015년 5월 7일
and the name instead of a name. well done.
2015년 5월 5일

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Sherlock Holmes

I heard that yesterday was Sherlock Holmes's birthday. I mean that the first story about him appeared on December 1, 1887.
The author was Sir Arthur Conan Doyle, and a name of the novel was "A Study in Scarlet". Although the story was about 150 pages, it only took Doyle three weeks to write. I have not read it yet, so I want to choose it when I buy my next new novel.

 

Apart from the above corrections, the text seems fine to me.

2015년 3월 16일

Sherlock Holmes

I heard that yesterday was Sherlock Homes's birthday. I mean that the first story about him appeared on December 1, 1887.
The author was Arthur Conan Doyle, and a name of the novel was "A Study in Scarlet. Although the story was about 150 pages, it only took Dole three weeks to write. I have not read it yet, so I want to choose it when I buy it next when I get a new novel.

2015년 2월 28일
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