Eugene
Please tell me how to revise these sentences, which is told some mistakes exist. Thank you. Recently, we have been exposed to the widely spread news regarding a mother's memoir concerning tough parenting, or parenting with sticks. For instance, deprived of their cheerful childhood, children could have awful memory, which is believed to contribute to vast quantity of psychological disease. Consequently, I firmly maintain that the negative influences parenting with sticks exerts outweigh the positive ones.
2014년 12월 19일 오전 4:34
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第二句. 我會這樣寫. Deprived of cheerful childhood, children grow up with awful memory, which contributes to vast quantity of psychological diseases. 差別在於. 這裡的 which 指整個子句. 你那裡的 which 好像僅指 awful memory.
2015년 3월 18일
谢谢。
2014년 12월 19일
我觉得你写得好棒啊!我觉得没有错误。 可能是“diseases"吧。
2014년 12월 19일
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