Santa is coming Santa is coming hohoho it's cold but there is not snow. ah, Sa Pa have snow fall. it's seem to be beautiful. but there are people will be cold. that is not good. yes, it's very bad.

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2014년 12월 19일 오후 4:15

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Santa is Coming

Santa is coming, ho ho ho!
It's cold but there isn't any snow.
Ah, Santa Claus have make snow fall.

It's seem to be so beautiful, but there are people will be cold.

That is not good. Yes, it's very bad.

2014년 12월 19일

Santa is Coming

Santa is coming, Ho ho ho!
It's so cold, but there isn't any snow.
Ah, Sa Pa, I wish you would have snow!

It would be so beautiful, but the people would be so cold!

That is a little better, no?

You could write, "I wish you had a <em>snowfall</em>," but that would just refer to one instance, not the snow that is on the ground.

2014년 12월 19일

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