Magaly
I'm back Hi, I have been out of italki for a long time,but I still want to learn English , I really like this lenguage and sometimes, I don't know why. I like when I hear someone speak it. I wish I can travel to the US and learn English completely.Now I'm watching ''The mentalist'' I like this show because patrick jane is so smart and He can predict what others people will do and why they are doing that. Can you correct my text, please?
2014년 12월 20일 오전 7:06
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I'm back!

Hi, I have been away from italki for a long time,but I still want to learn English. I really like this language. and sometimes, I don't know why, but sometimes I like to hear it being spoken. I wish I could travel to the US and learn English completely. Now I'm watching ''The mentalist.'' I like this show because Patrick Jane is very smart. and He can predict what others people will do and why they are going to do it.

Can you correct my text, please?

2014년 12월 20일
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I also love the Mentalist, though I haven't seen this show on TV for about two years now. Welcome back :)

 

 

I'm back

Hi, I have been out of away from italki for a long time, but I still want to learn English. I really like this language and sometimes, I don't know why, I like when I to hear someone speaking it. I wish I can could travel to the US and learn English completely.

Now I'm watching "The mentalist", a I like this show I like because Patrick Jane is so smart and he can predict what others people will do and why they are doing that.

Can you correct my text, please?

2014년 12월 20일
1

I'm back

Hi, I have been away from out of italki for a long time, but I still want to learn English. , I really like this language and sometimes, I don't know why. I like when I hearing it spoken. someone speak it. I wish I could visit can travel to the US and learn English properly. completely. Now I'm watching ''The Mentalist'' now, I like this show because Patrick Jane is so smart and he can predict what others people will do and why they are doing it that.

Can you correct my text, please?

2014년 12월 20일
welcome to our community ....
2014년 12월 20일
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