Is it correct? Is this sentence correct? "Assessment of occupational exposure to whole body vibration among subway drivers ". Thanks for your correction.

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jamshid

2014년 12월 20일 오후 9:34

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As it is a title, I have corrected the capitalization.

"Assessment of Occupational Exposure to Whole Body Vibration Among Subway Drivers ".

I haven't decided whether vibrations or vibration is better. I hope this response bumps your question to the top for a second or third opinion.

2014년 12월 26일

Thank you Mr.Morris and Azalea. You are right, this is the title of essay.

2014년 12월 27일

I agree with Mr. Morris. Of course if it is a title, it does not follow standard capitalization rules.

2014년 12월 24일

If this is a title (e.g. of an article, chapter or essay) then it is correct. If it is not a title, then it is not correct, because it is missing a verb (i.e. it is a noun phrase, not a clause. To make it a fully correct sentence you could add a verb (i.e. a main vern in a tense), for example: 'There WAS an assessment...'

2014년 12월 20일

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