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First day Today is my first day to join our big family.I hope you can help me to improve myself with this.I come from China and i want to learn English.If you want to learn Chinese.i think,we can help each other.

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First Day

Today is my first day on italki. to join our big family.I hope you can help me to improve. myself with this.I come from China and I want to learn English. If you want to learn Chinese, I think,we can help each other.

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First day

Today is my first day to join our big family.I hope you can help me to improve myself my english with this.I come from China and I want to learn English.If you want to learn Chinese,I thinkwe can help each other.

 

 

 

good job!Remember,I on it's own is always capitalized.like:I am a Child.But if it's"You like ice-cream,then don't capitalize the I.

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Leigh Mumford wrote everything, but what about "come from China" I didn't get it, wouldn't it be more accurate to write came from ?

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