Alex
January 26, 2015 "I am so tired that I can not do anything anymore" that was my words and reaction after one more failure in my career. But if I think about the people who are completely exhausted and in spite of this are forced to work hard for their living and their families, it's amazing is not it? . That kind of people encourage me. And I try to persuade myself never come into such disappointment because it can finally end up with depression. Conversely in order to make your future better and safer you have(to analyze your past) to find some flaws from your past life and get some lessons from it.
2015년 1월 26일 오전 8:43
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January 26, 2015

"I am so tired that I cannot (one word) do anything any more (two words)" those were (plural) my words and reaction after another failure in my career. But if I think about the people who are completely exhausted and in spite of this are forced to work hard for their living and their families, it's amazing isn't it? Those kinds of people encourage me. And I try to persuade myself never to become so disappointed because it could finally lead to depression. Conversely, in order to make your future better and safer you have (to analyze your past) so that you can to learn from your past mistakes. find some flaws from your past life and get some lessons from it.

2015년 1월 26일
Please, correct my entry. Thanks in advance.
2015년 1월 26일
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