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When You Are Old When I am old, I wish I am be truely loved and someone companys for the last minute.

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When You Are Old

When I am old, I wish hope [1] I am will [2] be truely truly loved and will be in someone's companys for the last minute.

 

When I am old, I hope I will be truly loved and will be in someone's company for the last minute.

 

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[1] The word 'wish' is generally used to refer your present desire.  For example:

"I wish I was in love."

The word 'hope' is a better choice to refer to a future desire.  For example:

"I hope I will find love."

 

[2] Because you are talking about the future, you need to use the future tense.  As examples:

"I did find love."  (Past tense.)

"I am in love."  (Present tense.)

"I will find love."  (Future tense.)

 

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What a romantic notebook entry...

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