Zoraida
My first day! Well, from today I am going to try to improve my English level, mainly about conversation. I need to increase my fluency and oral comprehesion. I´ll be very pleased to receive suggestions of english native people and, of course, ´ll help everybody who is learning spanish. It is my new year´s proposal!!!!
2015년 1월 27일 오후 3:25
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My first day!

Well, from today I am going to try to improve my English level, mainly about conversation. I need to increase my fluency and oral comprehension. I´ll I'd be very pleased to receive suggestions of from english native people native English speakers and, of course, I´ll help everybody anybody who is learning Spanish. It is my new year´s proposal resolution!!!!

 

Well done. My comments in red are corrections, my comments in blue/gray are suggestions to sound more fluent.

2015년 1월 27일
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2015년 8월 21일

My first day!

Well, from today I am going to try to improve my English level, mainly about my conversation. I need to increase my fluency and oral comprehesion. I´ll I'd be very pleased to receive suggestions of from English natives people and, of course, I´ll help everybody who is learning spanish. It is my new year´s proposal!!!!

 

Hope the corrections help.

Peace,

Alasdair

2015년 1월 27일
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