stevan zapata
my dear older I feel sad when I walk down on the street and I watch some older without opportunity; without happiness and with their old clothes and the more important without a smile in their face. I feel angry because in my country there aren't opportunity by them. I look them work in the street selling and they recycling in the trash. I would like help them to have a live improved.
2015년 1월 28일 오전 2:34
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My Dear Elder

I feel sad when I walk down on the street and I see elderly homeless people watch some older without opportunity; without happiness and with their old clothes and the more important more importantly without a smile on their face. I feel angry because in my country there aren't enough opportunities for them. opportunity by them. I see them working in the street re-selling what they find and they recycling in the trash. I would like to help them to have a better life.

2015년 1월 28일
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