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Blue Complexion There I was, sauntering along the riverbank. A toddler with blue complexion came. He asked me, “Why are you so sad?” “Really, am I?” I replied. Quickly, I walked past the creature, without looking at him. “How arrogant you are!” I pretended to be totally unaware of his anger and to be more arrogant- raising my head and walking with a comical, yet, I believed to be, at the time, a confident manner. “Hey!” He shouted at me, suddenly. “Wh…” Before I could respond with a perfectly crafted sentence, I fell into the mud. “Dear! Dear!” I was left sitting in the mud, peering into the dark wood, and being consoled by the starry night.
2015년 1월 29일 오전 8:13
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Thank you. :)
2015년 1월 30일
A great piece! I prefer the title, "Blue Complexioned"
2015년 1월 30일
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