Helga
Day off. Today I took the day off from work because my ophthalmologist prescribed me a photocoagulation, which is a laser surgery for the eyes. Although the procedure is really simple and without risks, my blood pressure dropped and I fainted after it was over. I think that happened because I was a little scared without reasons! My friend R took me home to rest all day and it had been excellent, I had a light meal and listened to music. I'll probably take laser surgery because of my myopia but I've promised myself to be more relaxed next time!
2015년 1월 29일 오전 10:54
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Day off.

Today I took the day off from work because my ophthalmologist prescribed me a photocoagulation, which is a laser surgery for the eyes. Although the procedure is really simple and without risks, my blood pressure dropped and I fainted after it was over. I think that happened because I was a little scared without reasons! (<em>or</em> a little scared for no reason)
My friend R took me home to rest all day and it had been excellent, I had a light meal and listened to some music.
I'll probably take get laser surgery because of my myopia but I've promised myself to be more relaxed next time!

 

Outstanding! Only one minor error, which I have marked in red. My comments in blue/gray are simply suggestions to sound more natural.

2015년 1월 29일
haha, thanks Ajit!
2015년 1월 29일
I was just kidding, you should take care and rest. I remember my brother too had that laser treatment and now he dont need to wear any glasses.
2015년 1월 29일
Sorry, I don't understand what your comment means. :(
2015년 1월 29일
Eye talk eye
2015년 1월 29일
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