Javier
My first entry Hi everyone. I have to confess that I am afraid to express my ideas or simply to talk of whatever in English, I think that it's normal for most of people who want to learn another language, I would like you to help me to improve my level in speaking and writing.
2015년 1월 31일 오후 8:19
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My first entry

Hi everyone.
I have to confess that I am afraid to express my ideas or simply to talk of whatever in English, I think that it's normal for most of people who want to learn another language, I would like you to help me to improve my level in speaking and writing.

 

Just a thought: 

 

Be mindful of your <em>punctuation</em>.  Using a comma implies that you are separating  independent clauses.  To start a new sentence you would need to put a period after the previous one. 


"I have to confess that I am afraid to express my ideas, or to even have a discussion in English."  <--- This would be the appropriate way of using a period and comma.



Happy Learning!

 

Chaise W., Community Tutor 

 

2015년 1월 31일
1

My first entry

Hi everyone.
I have to confess that I am afraid to express my ideas or simply to talk about whatever in English, I think that it's normal for most of people who want to learn another language, I would like you to help me to improve my level in speaking and writing.

2015년 1월 31일
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