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Studing English I taked this holyday to study english, since a need to improve this. It was so I knew the Italk that looks to be very cool.
2015년 1월 31일 오후 8:31
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Studing English

I taked this holyday to study english, since a need to improve this. It was so I knew the Italk that looks to be very cool.

 

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I took time over the holiday to learn English, because I needed some improvement. 

2015년 1월 31일
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Studying English

I took this holiday to study English because I need to improve it. 

2015년 1월 31일

Studing English

I took this holyday to study english, because I need to improve it. It was so I knew the Italk that looks to be very cool.

2015년 2월 1일
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