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oh my gosh Why does this year cast so hot!! In japan, music festivan called summer sonic is hold every year . And have been to this festival twice. Last year , the casts is not interesting for me , so i didnt go. I went two and three years ago. And this summer , i will be very busy , so I wil not be able to go to this fes. Recently , its casts was announced. When i saw that casts, I got reglet to see. Because the casts are macklemore&lyan Ruis , pharell williams, imagin dragons, magic , and so on. Oh oh oh , it is so hot. Why is this year. I want to listen to Thrift shop on live. Haaaaaaaaaaaa

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Oh my gosh! 

Why does this year cast so hot?! In Japan, there is a music festival called Summer Sonic and it is held every year. I have been to this festival twice. Last year, the casts were not interesting for to me, so I didnt go. I went two and three years ago, and this summer , I will be very busy , so I will not be able to go to this time. Recently , its casts were announced. When i saw that the casts, I got reglet to see. Because the casts are macklemore& Iyan Ruis , Pharell Williams, Imagin Dragons, Magic , and so on. Oh, oh, oh! It is so hot! Why does it have to be hot this year? I want to listen to Thrift shop on live. Haaaaaaaaaaaa

 

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