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really important is enjoy the way :) The last weekend was very fun. I was to ones mountains called "Sierra de Gredos" locate in the center of Spain. The highest peak measure 2.592m, its name is (Almanzor peak), many climbers of many different countries going to Spain to scale it.It isn't a very hight peak but is dangerous because is very steep!. For climbing in winter is necessary crampons and ice ax if you don't want fall down. I can't make top but no matter, really important is enjoy the way :)
2015년 2월 18일 오후 6:48
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really important is enjoy the way :)

The Last weekend was very a lot of fun. I was went to ones a mountains called "Sierra de Gredos" located in the center of Spain. The highest peak measures 2.592m, its name is (Almanzor peak), many climbers of from many different countries going come to Spain to scale climb it. It isn't a very hight high peak but it is dangerous because it is very steep! For To climbing in Winter it is necessary to use crampons and an ice axe if you don't want to fall down.
I can't make it to the top but no it doesn't matter, what is really important is to enjoy the way experience :)

2015년 2월 18일

It is really important to enjoy yourself :)

The Last weekend I had a lot of fun. I went to some mountains called "Sierra de Gredos" which are located in the centre of Spain. The highest peak measures 2.592m, its name is (Almanzor peak), many climbers from many different countries come to Spain to climb it. It isn't a very high peak but is dangerous because it is very steep!. To climb it in winter is necessary to use the correct equipment such as crampons and an ice axe if you don't want fall down.
I can't make it to the top but it doesn't matter, the most important thing is to enjoy the experience :)

 

 

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2015년 2월 18일
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