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THE MOBILE PHONE HAS MADE A POSITIVE CONTRIBUTION TO OUR LIVES TODAY Who of us don’t have cellphone nowadays? We all have a lot to thank to this magnific device, but in spite of that, it has some negatives sides. On the one hand, it makes posible to keep in touch in a quick way with family and friends at distance, either with calls, instant messages or using social networks. For example, in case there is a familiar or friend who has moved to another city. Moreover, it becomes a useful tool in case of emergency, like a traffic accident, where a phone call can save lifes. On the other hand, it is well-known that mobile phones have a bit of negative fame. For a lot of people they have become a leisure, spending so much time of the day using it, up to the point that people get dependance. Sometimes this abuse can go a bit further and be dangerous. For example, the increase of the number of accidents caused for texting at the wheel. To sum up, phones can be used for necessity and, why not, for fun, but we all need to be conscient when their use could be harmful.

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THE MOBILE PHONE HAS MADE A POSITIVE CONTRIBUTION TO OUR LIVES TODAY

Who of us doesn’t have cellphone nowadays? We all have a lot of reasons to be thankful for this magnificent device, but in spite of that, it has some negatives sides.
On the one hand, it makes it possible to keep in touch in a quick way with family and friends at a distance, either with calls, instant messages or using social networks. For example, in case there is a family member or friend who has moved to another city. Moreover, it becomes a useful tool in case of emergency, like a traffic accident, where a phone call can save lives.
On the other hand, it is well-known that mobile phones can also have a bit of a bad reputation. For a lot of people they have become their entertainment, spending so much time of the day using it, up to the point that people become dependent. Sometimes this abuse can go a bit further and be dangerous. For example, the increase in the number of accidents caused by / as a result of texting at the wheel.
To sum up, phones can be used for necessity and, why not, for fun, but we all need to be conscious of when their use could be harmful.

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