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correct my sentences please... Today, I watched the weather man predicting a foot long snow in my area in TV. What I don't like when it snows is driving. The roads get silk and dangerous. Many car accidents that fatal occur during snowing days. I wish there is a technology that is able to change the snow to liquid water before it reaches to the ground. It feels rain is much okay than snow. May be I have to get some kind of proposal to apple to work on environmental issues along with communication technologies. Who knows my idea might put billion dollars on some once packet.

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correct my sentences please...

Today, I watched the TV weather man predicting a foot of snow in my area. I don't like driving when it snows. The roads get slick and dangerous. Many car accidents that are fatal occur during snowing days. I wish there was a technology that is able to change the snow to liquid water before it reaches to the ground. It feels rain is much better than snow. Maybe I have to make some kind of proposal to Apple to work on environmental issues along with communication technologies. Who knows? My idea might put a billion dollars in someone's pocket.

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