Junior J Rodriguez H
My mine goes blank I want to talk about whatever but nothing comes out of my mind. I suppose that I am not the only one thinking about it.I'm listening to music right now, specifically a song called "Flowers for a Ghost" by Thriving Ivory. A part of the song goes like "I feel like a ship, God knows I'm sinking", that is the way I am feeling right now, sinking as I try to type something :D So, I have some paraghraph done right above there, that means that I could be able to make a composition by my own when my mind has gone blank which makes me feel way too satisfaying. Now I will wait to contemplate a few corrections.
2015년 2월 27일 오전 5:19
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My mind goes blank

I want to talk about whatever but nothing comes out of my mind. I suppose that I am not the only one thinking about it. I am not the only one that happens to. I'm listening to music right now, specifically a song called "Flowers for a Ghost" by Thriving Ivory. A part of the song goes like "I feel like a ship, God knows I'm sinking", that is the way I am feeling right now, sinking as I try to type something :D

So, I have written that paragraph  above, that means that I could be able to make a composition on my own. 

 when my mind has gone blank which makes me feel way too satisfaying????.

Now I will wait to see what corrections I have to make.

2015년 2월 27일
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