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something sad. I have to leave home to go to school to start My New study tomorrow. Actually, study not My favorite,but I really know if I want to earn big money in the future,I must study well now. Maybe, think classmates and friends can make me happy.
2015년 2월 27일 오후 11:48
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something sad.

I have to leave home to go to school [and] start My New studies tomorrow. Actually, studying is not my favorite thing to do, but I really know if I want to earn big money in the future, I must study well now.
I think, maybe think my [new] classmates and friends can will (be able to) make me happy [cheer me up].

 

"Making someone happy" can be a rather strong expression. It sometimes implies a long-term kind of happiness or fulfillment in life, of the more idealistic kind.

The last clause is in a future tense because you haven't started your studies and so they're not your classmates yet.

2015년 2월 28일

<em>Here are some different ways to write this. </em>

something sad.

I have to leave home tomorrow to go to school to start my new program of study tomorrow. Actually, studying is not my favorite, but I really know that if I want to earn a lot of money in the future, I must study well/hard/a lot now.
Maybe think my classmates and friends can make me happy.

2015년 2월 28일
Hopefully your classmates and friends WILL help you through this sad time.
2015년 2월 28일
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