silvia
How to make nicer this email?? Dear XXX, I am writing this email because I am not sure whether I accepted the invitation. I see there are two different hours scheduled (10 am and 11am). Could you please confirm if 11am is the right time? I would also like to know if it will be a conference call or a personal interview. Thank you in advance for your answer. Silvia
2015년 3월 2일 오후 7:51
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How to make nicer this email better??

Dear XXX,

I am writing this email because/as I'm (try and use contractions whenever possible)  am not sure whether I accepted your the invitation. I noticed that see there are two different times listed hours scheduled (10 am and 11am). and I'd appreciate if Could you could please confirm whether if 11am is the correct right time for my appointment? I would also be interested like to know if it will be a conference call or a personal interview.

Thank you in advance for your reply. answer.

Silvia

I hope this helps you Silvia.  I tried to make it sound as formal as possible.

2015년 3월 3일
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