zhouhongli
Bad day Today I feel so sad , beacouse of my job , always it's unlucky....if i always insist , maybe i can succed . but I'm not . now i have lose my job, i want to go aborad . my family unagree with me . i don't know what i can to find , two years i don't want to find nurse job . what can i do ? i want to make money .
2015년 3월 3일 오전 4:26
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Bad Day

I feel so sad, beacause I lost of my job today. I'm always it's unlucky. If I keep trying, maybe I can succeed. but I'm not . now i have lose my job, I want to go abroad, but my family is unsupportive with me . I don't know what to do. i can to find I want to make money, but I don't want to be working as a nurse for the next two years. i don't want to find nurse job . What can I do? 

 

 

<em>**Side Notes:</em>

I can understand what you're trying to say, but you need to work a little bit on spelling and punctuation. Overall, very good!

2015년 3월 3일
不用担心,妳会找到理想的工作的。 “I feel so sad today, because job hunting isn't easy here and sometimes it all depend on luck. All I can do is keep trying and never give up. I have lost my job recently and I have intention to go oversea for further education training. However, I have not see any support from my family and lost the sight of my future. Can anyone shed light on my darkness?"
2015년 3월 3일
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