Everything you ever wanted is in Rome Four months ago, I travelled to Rome. It was in November, the weather was very nice and it was not cold at all. At first glance, everything seems to be old and

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Everything you ever wanted is in Rome Four months ago, I travelled to Rome. It was in November, the weather was very nice and it was not cold at all. At first glance, everything seems to be old and messy in Rome. Uneven ground, curvy roads, an almost dry river, a steady stream of people and cars, ruins ... But when I arrived home and looked at the photos I took, I could see the unreal beauty of every picture. Rome is a magical city. It’s a city with soul. There are a lot of attractions in Rome, so much that you will get lost, so much that you don´t really know how to appreciate them. Cathedrals, ruins, squares, all sights worth seeing are closed to each other. It’s dazzling. My favorite places in Rome (not including the Vatican) are the Colosseo and the Piazza Venezia. History, religion, art, fashion, sports, food, landscape... Everything you ever wanted is in Rome.

2015년 3월 3일 오전 4:30

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Everything you ever wanted is in Rome

Four months ago, I traveled to Rome.
It was in November and the weather was very nice. and it was not cold at all.
At first glance, everything seems to be old and messy in Rome.
Uneven ground, curvy roads, an almost dry river, a steady stream of people and cars, ruins ...
But when I arrived home and looked at the photos I took, I could see the unreal beauty of every picture.
Rome is a magical city. It’s a city with soul.
There are a lot of attractions in Rome, so much that you will get lost, so much that you don´t really know how to appreciate them.
Cathedrals, ruins, squares, all sights worth seeing are closed to each other. It’s dazzling.
My favorite places in Rome (not including the Vatican) are the Colosseo and the Piazza Venezia.
History, religion, art, fashion, sports, food, landscape...
Everything you ever wanted is in Rome.

2015년 3월 8일

Thank you Russ, you are absolutely right! I will learn to do so. I really appreciate your advice. Lots of thanks for the pdf document.

2015년 3월 14일

Evy, you may consider making paragraphs. When I took English, we were told to make a simple essay with five (5) paragraphs, with each paragraph 3-5 sentences long. I did a quick internet search, and one example that looked like what I learned can be found at http://www.bucks.edu/media/bcccmedialibrary/pdf/FiveParagraphEssayOutlineJuly08_000.pdf

2015년 3월 14일