David
Junk Food The junk food is so dangerous because hurt our health. I think that the most important is health and we must take care it. We must do a lof of sport and eat heathly. However I think that people just think in its bodies and in the future this society where people will just look the physical and not inside of the persons
2015년 3월 4일 오후 6:10
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Junk Food

The Junk foods is so dangerous because hurt harmful to our health. I think that the most important thing is our health and we must take care of it. We must do a lof of sport exercise a lot and eat heathly food


HoweverI think that people of this society will just think in its bodies their physical appearance and in the future this society where people will just look the physical and not inside of the persons more than who the person is.

2015년 9월 1일
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Junk Food

The junk food is so dangerous because hurt harmful to our health. I think that the most important thing is our health and we must take care it. We must do a lof of sport exercise regularly and eat heathly.

However I think that people just think in its bodies and in the future this society where people will just look the physical and not inside of the persons

However, I think that in the future people will just look at the physical part and not look at who the person is on the inside. (Or something like that..?)

2015년 3월 4일
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