Alex
The best birthday's present For my last birsday i resived a very special present. It was a vine, which was made in 1975. Can you imagine? Vine, wich older then me! It's anazing vine had apple and plum smell, and the great taste!
2015년 3월 6일 오후 3:08
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The best birthday's present!

For my last birthday I resived received a very special present.
It was a bottle of wine, which was made in 1975.
Can you imagine?
Wine, which was older then me[myself]!
It's from an amazing vine and had an apple and plum smell[it had an aroma of apples and plums], and the it tasted great taste!

 

Your version was understandable, Олеся. Mainly a few spelling errors.

The words in [] are an alternative.

I changed ".. was older .." because you drank it! (Therefore it doesn't exist anymore.)

I know that "wine" is "vine" in some languages, but vine is also where the grapes grow that become the wine. (You probably know that.)

Den

2015년 3월 7일

The best birthday present

For my last birthday I received a very special present.
It was a wine, which was made in 1975.
Can you imagine?
A wine, which is older then me!
It's an amazing vine had an apple and plum smell, and a great taste!

 

 

2015년 3월 6일
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