i am korean who likes to learn english. It is sunny day outside. I have to study hard for improving my english capability. It is very interesting for me to learn second language. Please let me know

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i am korean who likes to learn english. It is sunny day outside. I have to study hard for improving my english capability. It is very interesting for me to learn second language. Please let me know if there is anything to correct. Thank you. Have a great day..

2015년 3월 7일 오전 3:09

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I am a Korean person who likes to learn English. (Or 'I am Korean and I like to learn English') ('who' needs a noun, Korean person instead of Korean.)

It is a sunny day outside.
I have to study hard to improve my english capability.
It is very interesting for me to learn a second language.
Please let me know if there is anything to correct.
Thank you.

Have a great day..

2015년 3월 7일

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