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My brother wants me to do a job with good salary and live normally like the others.My job now is lower payment, more pressure and not stable, but I can follow my dream even not sure It will come true or not. What should I do?

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My brother wants me to have a job with a good salary and live normally like other people. My current job pays less, has more pressure, and is not stable. But I want to follow my dreams even if I don't know if they will come true. What should I do?