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Mornnig Hi guys, good mornning! Today I wake in my house with my bride. I'm so happy because she stay in my life, we marrid next mounth (I really happy). She it's so beautiful, fun, intelligent and I love her! I write this text for me to practice English and declare to my bride. Thank you and bye!

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Mornnig

Hi guys, good mornning!

Today I wake in my house with my bride. I'm so happy because she stay in my life, we marrid next mounth (I really happy). She it's so beautiful, fun, intelligent and I love her!

I write this text for me to practice English and declare to my bride.

Thank you and bye!

 

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Hello Igor, this is so nice and sweet that you make an open declaration to your bride or your bride to be.  Are you getting married next month or did you get married last month.  If you are just living together, this is called "shacking" in the U.S.
Your Correction:
I woke this morning with my bride beside me.  I'm so happy because she is in my life.  We married last month and I am really happy.  She is so beautiful, full of fun and she is also intelligent.  I love her for all of these reasons.

I am writing to practice my English writing skills and delcare my affection and adoration for my wife.

I hope you enjoy my rewrite.
Dr. Priscilla

 

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