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My bes friend Hello. My name is Bárbara. I´m 23 years old. I go to talk about my best friend. She is girl. She is 23 years old to. She has a long black hair and brown eyes. She is a happy and honest person. I met her when we were childs and actually I live with her because we study the same degree. I hope be her friend all my life because I love meet with her and together we spend our free time dancing and lauching.

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My bes friend

Hello.
My name is Bárbara. I´m 23 years old.
I go to talk about my best friend. She is girl. She is 23 years old to. She has a long black hair and brown eyes. She is a happy and honest person.
I met her when we were childs and actually I live with her because we study the same degree.
I hope be her friend all my life because I love meet with her and together we spend our free time dancing and lauching.

 

Correction:

My best friend

 

Hello,

My name is Bárbara and I'm 23 years old. I am going to talk about my best friend. She is a girl and she is 23 years old. She has long black hair and brown eyes. Also, she is a very happy and honest person.

I met her when we were both children. Now, we live together because we both have the same major.

I hope that we are best friends for the rest of my life because i love spending time with her. We spend a lot of our free time dancing and laughing.

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