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Please correct me if I am wrong I would like to travel to different parts for around the world, because It would be interesting to meet many cultures for example in Japan there are a lot of popular places for visiting and this country would be the first that I'll visit on the next years, well, I hope so. :)

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Please correct me if I am wrong

I would like to travel to different parts places for all around the world, because It would be interesting to meet/know many/different cultures, for example in Japan there are a lot of popular/interesting places for to visiting and this country would will be the first that I'll visit on the next years, well, I hope so. :)

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Please Correct Me if I am Wrong

I would like to travel to different parts for around the world. because It would be very interesting to meet many new cultures. for example in Japan, there are a lot of popular places for to visiting. I hope this country will be the first that I get to visit in the coming years. :)

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very good, thanks :)
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In English, the main words in the title are capitalized. I added different words to make it more interesting. Also it sounds better to leave out "for example" but it is fine to use.

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